

6: all good; we changed the key clicks order and notation to: middle C, G below and D below.
7: section removed; This section will be completely removed. (just updated at 12.45 noon - 12/09)
8: here I expected something more like this glissando:
If it's not possible in this register no worries, you can do it chromatically.
9: all good; we changed the singing F to F above.
10: - section removed; (updated at 2pm - 12/09)
11: - section removed; (updated at 2pm - 12/09)
If it doesn't work well, just play the written F# one octave lower without any singing.
12: no issues.
13: all good; this multiphonic tremolo worked well.
14: could you check if this multiphonic sweep is possible:
Spectral Sweep
it's from this blog (https://heatherroche.net/2016/09/26/spectral-multiphonics-bb-and-bass), it's in the 4th audio example, the person who wrote it explains how she does it.
If it's not possible you can just play the bass note, no problem.
15: all good; we changed to the same multiphonics as in section 3 but with tremolo (alternating keys).
16: section removed - I just decided to remove this section as well where you had the harmonic blips, so this won't be necessary anymore (updated at 2pm - 12/09)
Thank you very much and sorry for all this trouble!!
